What do you guys think of my new business card design?

**BurlyGuys** · 04-18-2013, 12:10 PM

Hey, Bryan, my two cents:

Get rid of the #. Just use standard telephone formatting. (xxx) xxx-xxxx.
Otherwise people look at it and just think "Why?"

I'm iffy on the bottom line, and a tag line certainly never hurts. (Burly Guys: The Official Sponsors of Empty Space!)
But it is kind of half in and half out of your graphic. If you're keeping it, I'd suggest putting it either entirely IN
or entirely OUT of the graphic. Much more easily readable and less confusion.

I think you've got a nice card going on there.

**newattitude** · 04-18-2013, 07:11 PM

Originally Posted by BurlyGuys

Hey, Bryan, my two cents:

Get rid of the #. Just use standard telephone formatting. (xxx) xxx-xxxx.
Otherwise people look at it and just think "Why?"

I'm iffy on the bottom line, and a tag line certainly never hurts. (Burly Guys: The Official Sponsors of Empty Space!)
But it is kind of half in and half out of your graphic. If you're keeping it, I'd suggest putting it either entirely IN
or entirely OUT of the graphic. Much more easily readable and less confusion.

I think you've got a nice card going on there.

I agree with Burly on moving that ll the way into the center of the card. But, then the ''eco friendly'' logo might look out of place.