I think i would re-work the "about us" section. Cut it down to your current business location, contact information, and reasonable business hours. Ten hour work days M-F and half day on Saturday are about the standard. Closed Sundays & holidays.
I know it's harsh, but you'll never survive the business climate here in Maine by reinventing yourself every so often. You either know what you're doing or you don't. It just seems like you haven't quite hit your stride yet.
Above all else ... think before you speak, choose your words carefully, and always be impeccable in your word.
Edited to add:
I went over it some more. There's way too much information being presented and spelling mistakes here & there. Again ... i know it's harsh, but it needs a bit of polish.
Maybe have a mentor from the small business administration counsel you on how to refine it ? The desire to work hard and do well is certainly there but a college educated person with a degree in business could help with some of the things that aren't your strong suit.
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