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maxa Website up and running 01-26-2012, 11:57 AM
doso Hi, Maxa. If you'd like, I... 01-26-2012, 12:24 PM
maxa would love the tips 01-26-2012, 12:26 PM
corycouch just me and may have missed... 01-26-2012, 02:14 PM
IntrepidMuppet Tip 1 - Forget the free... 01-26-2012, 03:54 PM
thortek A few tips. 1) Your first... 01-26-2012, 08:45 PM
forwardlookguy I would have to agree with... 01-27-2012, 08:31 PM
doso This is what I was going to... 01-28-2012, 08:22 AM
GeorgeB Cheapest place to register is... 01-28-2012, 09:43 AM
thortek icdsoft.com is who i used to... 01-28-2012, 09:48 AM
GeorgeB Not a bad site. However, out... 01-28-2012, 10:21 AM
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    I would have to agree with registering a domain. It just looks more professional than any free hosting places.

    I'm a real stickler when it comes to punctuation and grammar; especially on a website that potentially thousands of people will see. Please don't take offense but I took the liberty to correct your entries. You can copy and paste this over your existing text or read through it and see what I corrected. I did not change anything, just made grammar and punctation corrections.

    Thanks you for taking time out of your day to take a look at my site and make the world a cleaner place. My name is Max and i am the founder and main runner of Max's scrap metal.My goal is to keep as much reusable and recyclable materials out of the landfill as i can.
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    Thank you for taking the time out of your day to take a look at my site and make the world a cleaner place. My name is Max and I am the founder and main runner of Max's Scrap Metal. My goal is to keep as much reusable and recyclable materials out of the landfill as I can.
    I would consider rewording "main runner of Max's scrap metal." Perhaps "I am the founder and operator of..." Also, your whole name should be capitalized as in: "Max's Scrap Metal" since this is your business name.



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    So now you may be wondering what is this going to cost me to get my scrap metal removed? That is a very good questions it will cost you nothing. I am offering a free pick up and drop of all scrap metal. Even in some cases we may pay you for getting rid of your scrap metal. If you have large amounts of scrap please feel free to call to get a quote.
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    So you may be wondering "what is it going to cost me to get my scrap metal removed?" That is a very good question! It will cost you nothing! I am offering a free pick up and drop of all scrap metal. In some cases we may even pay you for getting rid of your scrap metal. If you have large amounts of scrap, please feel free to call and get a quote.
    I added some punctation after "question" and "nothing". I'm not sure what you meant to say with "I am offering a free pick up and drop of all scrap metal." If you meant to say drop off I would just take that out completely. Since you are removing items from people's places, you are not dropping anything off. Unless I read that wrong.

    Also, if you plan on keeping your current format, if you are not going to be adding anything to your blog or photo album, just delete them. I for one hate seeing incomplete links, etc. on websites. I know you just made the site so you may be intending to add some entries to your blog, pictures to the albums, etc. but I just thought I'd mention that.

    I hope this helps!

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