posted craigslist ad today is this good?

[t00nces2]

i was wandering should i change anything on it? i mean i can only do so much you know.

free pick up of scrap metal will pick it up same day

Hi I am looking for free scrap that people want taken away or you just want to get rid of. You must be either in the town of north liberty or in the country on the church of christ side since its close to me lol. I use a dolly cart to transport my scrap don't use a car don't drive eats into profits. The kind of scrap I'm looking for is: car batteries,computer battery backups also known as a ups for computers when the power goes out,electric motors,car radiators,brass and copper plumbing pipes,window and central air conditioners,dehumidifiers,wires of any kind,house wires,cable wires,underground wires,faucets,ceiling fans,battery lead cables from cars,trucks and tractors the cables that go to your battery, cable or satalite wires,faucets,microwaves,small electronics,spools of wire or cable. I think I got most on here what I want but if you have anything else just txt or call if u don't have a cell phone. I prefer u txt unless ur not able to do so if it goes to voice mail leave a message and I will get to u when I can thank u. A side note I do not take old tube tv's to hard to get rid of and also refrigerators,washers,dryers,freezers and stoves are also to big for me to handle on a dolly. it helps the environment

is this to much?

Don't overanalyze. You will wind up with analysis paralysis. It is just a stupid CL ad. Try that one and see how it does. Wait a week and while it is running, compose another ad with what you consider to be improvements. Target specific markets and see how they do.



Have fun with it. I once wrote an ad for a dog crate and suggested they were large enough they could be used for children. I got some flack from some girl telling me I should be ashamed of myself and that there were children who were mistreated in the world. I told her my kids turned out just fine. I don't know how old you are, but next week (heII, by dinner time) nobody except those interested in doing business with you will ever remember our ad.